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Manuscript Review Service

Manuscript Review Services: $75 Per Hour

Manuscript Reviews provide content-focusedbig-picture feedback on an entire manuscript (not copy editing). Feedback is sent via email through the Program Director and is provided as a summary and comments written directly on the manuscript. There is no back-and-forth emailing with the reviewing consultant and no face-to-face mentoring (unless the reviewer agrees to meet as part of the Hourly Mentoring Service). The turnaround for this service is usually less than a month. A typical reading rate is 12 double-spaced pages/hour (depending on the commentary requested/required). Manuscripts must be submitted electronically as Word documents (double-spaced, 12-point standard font). Payment is required in advance of the Manuscript Review.

Perfect For Experienced Writers Looking For: 

  •  Holistic review on an entire draft
  • Written feedback on a completed draft
  • Critique summary on an entire draft
  • No personal interaction/conversation with a writing coach
  • Detailed review/beta-reading of a completed manuscript that has been through revisions and editing, and are being prepared for publication

Things To Know Before You Solicit Services: 

  • The Mentoring Review Service is not intended for discussing portions of a work-in-progress with a writing coach. Find out more about Writer Mentoring Services.**
  • Mentors and consultants make every effort to help the author strengthen the current manuscript but they, and the Carnegie Center, make no guarantees that the author’s manuscript will be acquired by a publisher, or that it will achieve a specific level of sales.
  • Mentor, consultants, and the Carnegie Center have no ownership interest in the author’s work; the author retains all rights, including copyright.
  • Opinions, feedback, critiques, and reviews reflect the experiences and preferences of the mentors and consultants. The author determines what content in the sessions resonates with their project and writing style.
  • The Carnegie Center is not responsible for mentor or consultant comments or the content of sessions and reviews.

Consultant Direct Contact Policy & Fee Reduction Requests

DO NOT DIRECTLY CONTACT MANUSCRIPT CONSULTANTS. The Manuscript Review Service is offered as a cut-and-dry, single electronic exchange and is different from the Carnegie Center’s Writing Mentor Service, which pairs writers with mentors in a manner designed to encourage in-person and/or ongoing conversation.

If you would like to request a reduction of fees based on financial need, you may send your request via email to the Program Director. Include a brief explanation of your financial need in the body of the email.

Questions & Match Guidance

For more information about the Manuscript Review Services or for help choosing the best mentoring option for your project, contact Executive Director Jennifer Mattox at jmattox@carnegiecenterlex.org.


How To Schedule A Manuscript Review

1. Choose your Consultant
Browse bios of the Carnegie Center Manuscript Consultants.

2. Request Services
Send an email request for a Manuscript Review to the Program Director Z Valentine: zjackson@carnegiecenterlex.org:

  • Include REQUEST FOR MANUSCRIPT REVIEW in the subject header.
  • In the body of the email, list the name(s) of your preferred reviewing consultants (if you are not sure and would like recommendations, please indicate that here)
  • Provide the length of your manuscript (word count and number of pages)
  • Identify the genre of your manuscript
  • Give a brief summary of your manuscript
  • Attach the first ten (10) pages (double-spaced, 12-point standard font) of your manuscript

3. WAIT FOR A MATCH
Once received, the Coordinator of Author Services will make every attempt to match your manuscript with a consultant. A match is not guaranteed due to genre constraints and availability of slots per consultant.

4. SIGN MATCH AGREEMENT
Once a match has been determined and the consultant has reviewed your emailed information, the Coordinator of Author Services will send you an agreement detailing cost and timeline. The decision whether or not to sign the agreement form and begin the Manuscript Review consulting process is up to you.

5. PAY FOR SERVICES
Once you have signed the agreement and returned it to the Coordinator of Author Services, you will need prepay the total amount for the Manuscript Review consultation online. Be sure to include the number of hours stated on the agreement and your mentor in the ‘notes’ section during checkout*

6. MANUSCRIPT REVIEWED
Once the manuscript consultant has completed the review, the Coordinator of Author Services will forward the review and the reviewing process is complete.


MANUSCRIPT CONSULTANTS

Barbara Alfaro

memoir, poetry, and playwriting

Barbara Alfaro is the author of the play Dos Madres and the author of Theatre Mad, a collection of short comedies, Catbird, a book of poems, and Mirror Talk, a memoir about working in theatre which won the IndieReader Discovery Award for Best Memoir.

Ashley Blooms

Fiction & Nonfiction

Ashley Blooms is the author of Every Bone a Prayer, which NPR says “bears within its pages striking beauty and strangeness in equal measure.” She’s a graduate of the Clarion Writer’s Workshop and received her MFA as a John and Renee Grisham Fellow from the University of Mississippi. Her fiction has appeared in The Year’s Best Dark Fantasy & Horror, Fantasy & Science Fiction, and Strange Horizons, among others. Her nonfiction has appeared in the Oxford American.

Sarah Combs

Contemporary, Realistic, Literary Fiction (Adults & Teens)

Sarah Combs is the author of the young adult novels Breakfast Served Anytime and The Light Fantastic, both published by Candlewick Press. She mentors Author Academy writers of contemporary/realistic/literary fiction for teens and adults. 

Tony Crunk

Poetry, Creative Nonfiction, Hybrid/Multi-Genre Works, & Picture Books

Tony Crunk‘s first poetry collection, Living in the Resurrection, was the 1994 selection in the Yale Series of Younger Poets.  He has published numerous subsequent collections, as well as additional work in fiction, non-fiction, and children’s books.  He has held fellowships from the National Writer’s Voice and the Centrum Center for Education and the Arts, and he has taught creative writing and literature at the Universities of Virginia, Montana, and Alabama, as well as in a number of community education programs, including Hellgate Writers, Inc. (Missoula, MT) and Magic City Community Writers (Birmingham, AL).  He also served for nine years as Teaching Writer-in-Residence in the Writing Our Stories program in the Alabama state juvenile detention system.  He welcomes opportunities to work with, and learn from, writers of any level of experience (or inexperience).
For more information about Tony and his work, visit Cr-Cz – Browse A-Z Authors – Research Guides at University of Kentucky (uky.edu)

Tony is available for mentoring in poetry, creative nonfiction (memoir, essay), hybrid/multi-genre works, and children’s picture books.

If you are interested in meeting with Tony, send him an e-mail at tcrunk56@gmail.com.

Amanda Davis

Picture Books, Picture Book Dummies, Pitches, Queries, & Children’s Nonfiction

Amanda Davis is a teacher, artist, writer, and innovator who uses her words and pictures to light up the world with kindness. Amanda is the author of the award-winning picture book, 30,000 Stitches: The Inspiring Story of the National 9/11 Flag, Moonlight Memories (summer, 2023) and a yet to be announced forthcoming title. She also has poetry and illustrations featured in The Writers’ Loft Anthology: Friends & Anemones: Ocean Poems for Children.

Tracee de Hahn

Author Academy Coordinator

Tracee de Hahn is a published author of both fiction and non-fiction. A frequent instructor in topics related to writing, editing, and “getting published,” she enjoys helping writers identify their path and set a course for success. She has experience across the gamut of publishing, from Big 5 and Indy houses to self-publishing. She has also created, authored, and edited a range of magazines for major universities. Her latest book is A Well-Timed Murder, the second in the series from St. Martin’s Press/Minotaur Books. Currently, she is working on a mystery set in Kentucky.

Writing Mentor Service Topics: YA and adult fiction, writing for magazines, and topics in non-fiction (arts and humanities).

Mentorship Service Contact Email: contact@traceedehahn.com

Kristy Everington

Picture Books

Kristy Everington is the author of the picture book Isobel Adds It Up (Random House), which received a starred review from School Library Journal. She holds an MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults from Vermont College of Fine Arts. 

Linda Freudenberger

Creative Nonfiction, Poetry, Fiction, Editing, & Proofreading

Linda Freudenberger resides in Lexington, Ky with her Westie, Clancy, a certified therapy dog. She began writing in 2017 after the loss of her husband by taking writing classes and enrolling at the Author Academy at the Carnegie Center for Literacy and Learning. Her story “The Call: was published in the Personal Publishing Project anthology, Bearing Up, edited by Randell Jones. The story, “In the Holler”, was published in the anthology, That Southern Thing, also edited by Randell Jones. Her story “His Final Act of Kindness” is included in the 2021 anthology, Luck and Opportunity edited by Randell Jones. “Bowtie Whimsy” is a short story in the 2022 anthology, Curious Stuff edited by Randell Jones. She also has three essays on the online grief site opentohope.com. She recently completed a fictional novella about a teahouse that she is submitting for publication. She participated in the yearlong Poetry Gauntlet at the Carnegie Center by writing 112 poems in 2020. Her poem, “Communion,” was published in 2021 Volume 1 Issue 4 of Literary Accents, Katerina Stoykova, Editor. Two of her poems have been published on the Highland Park online poetry site in 2022. This December her poem “The Other Side of the Bed” will be published in the Workhorse magazine, The Yearling. On 9/5/2022 she completed the Writers Digest University copy editing certificate program.

Linda is available for editing, proofreading, and mentoring for creative nonfiction, poetry, and adult fiction.

Lisa Haneberg

Nonfiction & Crime Fiction

 Lisa Haneberg has an M.F.A. from Goddard College and is a fiction and nonfiction writer. She has published over fifteen nonfiction books and the first two books in her mystery series. She’s worked with agents, publicists, six traditional publishers, and has self-published print and e-books. She started blogging in 2004 before it was cool and is active on Twitter, Facebook, and LinkedIn. Lisa did a 9,400-mile solo motorbike tour to promote one of her books. She lives with her husband and two dogs in Lexington, Kentucky.

Marcia Thornton Jones

Picture Books, Early Chapter Books, Chapter Books, Midgrade Novels, & YA Novels

Marcia Thornton Jones is the author/co-author of 137 traditionally published books for children with sales totaling more than 45 million copies worldwide. Her books include the mid-grade novels WOODFORD BRAVE and CHAMP, picture books THE TALE OF JACK FROST and LEPRECHAUN ON THE LOOSE, and seven chapter book series including the bestselling The Adventures of the Bailey School Kids. Marcia is the co-author of WRITING FOR KIDS: THE ULTIMATE GUIDE and a former columnist for Writer’s Digest Magazine. Marcia’s latest books are the Graphix Chapter Books GHOSTS DON’T EAT POTATO CHIPS, VAMPIRES DON’T WEAR POLKA DOTS, FRANKENSTIEN DOESN’T PLANT PETUNIAS, and DRAGONS DON’T COOK PIZZA.

Marcia is available for writer mentoring, manuscript reviews, and as an Author Academy mentor for writers of picture books, early chapter books, chapter books, midgrade novels, and young adult novels.

Lisa Kerr

Picture Books, Middle Grade Fiction / Nonfiction, Memoir, Book Proposal Development, & More

Lisa Kerr is a children’s book author, playwright, educator, and essayist whose work has been featured in magazines and publications including Huffington PostNew York Magazine, Bustle, and more. She is the author of the nonfiction picture book, Wake, Sleepy One: California Poppies and the Super Bloom (West Margin Press). She lives in Central California. Lisa mentors writers on picture books, nonfiction and fiction middle grade, romance, memoir, using the specificity of language as a tool, book proposal development, and finding a place in the market for niche works. 

Mary Knight

Fiction / YA Fiction, Creative Nonfiction, Memoir, & Personal Essay

Mary Knight is the author of Saving Wonder, a middle grade novel published by Scholastic and winner of the 2017 Green Earth Book Award. With an MFA in Creative Writing from Spalding University, Mary has mentored writers in both young adult and adult fiction, and is also willing to work with writers of creative nonfiction, memoir, or personal essay. You can contact her directly through the website’s comment section (link below).

Doris Settles

the expert book, nonfiction, magazine writing, corporate writing, and public speaking

Doris Settles writes for newspapers and magazines, managed her own desktop-publishing business and wrote an “expert book” first self-published then picked up by a traditional publisher, wrote a second at their request, co-authored a history of Prohibition in Kentucky, has a 2022 picture book on gardening and has a children’s gardening journal due out late 2022. She is currently working on a middle-grade historical novel, a historical fiction picture book, and an adult literary novel as well as other picture books. Doris reviews expert books and children’s books, as well as works with authors on marketing and public speaking.

Andrew Shaffer

Nonfiction, Mystery, Poetry, & Self-Publishing

Andrew Shaffer is the New York Times bestselling author of Hope Never Dies: An Obama Biden Mystery, the nonfiction books Literary Rogues and Great Philosophers Who Failed at Love, and numerous other humorous works of fiction and nonfiction. He is a two-time Goodreads Choice Award nominee and a finalist in the Humor category. His work has been published in McSweeney’sMental Floss, and The Daily Beast. Shaffer attended the Iowa Writers’ Workshop and now lives in Kentucky.

Ana Siqueira

Picture Books

Ana Siqueira is a Spanish-language elementary teacher, an award-winning Brazilian children’s author, and a published author in the Foreign Language educational market. Her picture books include BELLA’S RECIPE FOR DISASTER/SUCCESS (Beaming Books, 2021), IF YOUR BABYSITTER IS A BRUJA/ CUANDO TU NIÑERA ES UNA BRUJA (SimonKids,2022), ABUELA’S SUPER CAPA/LA SUPER CAPA DE ABUELA (HarperCollins 2023), and ROOM IN MAMI’S CORAZON  (HarperCollins 2024). Ana is a member of  SCBWI, Las Musas Books, and co-founder of LatinxPitch. She mentors picture book writing.

Jason Sizemore

Fiction & Short Fiction (Science Fiction, Fantasy, & Horror)

Jason Size is a three-time Hugo Award-nominated editor, writer, and publisher who operates the science fiction, fantasy, and horror press Apex Book Company. He is the author of the collection of dark science fiction and horror shorts Irredeemable and the tell-all creative non-fiction For Exposure: The Life and Times of a Small Press Publisher.

Alecia Whitaker

Chapter Books, Middle Grade, YA, Adult Fiction, Screenplays, & Monologues

Alecia Whitaker grew up on a small farm in Cynthiana, KY. She is the author of four young adult novels–The Queen of Kentucky and the Wildflower series–as well as an actress with appearances on several television programs, commercials, and a YouTube show. When she’s not changing diapers or tripping over Legos, she’s working on two screenplays and an early chapter book. She packs her schedule with school and library visits each year, near or far. She currently lives in Long Island, New York with her husband and four children.

Christine Van Zandt

Adult and Children’s Fiction & Nonfiction, Short Stories, Articles, Book Synopses, and Query Letters.

Christine Van Zandt is a professional freelance editor with 12+ years experience helping writers achieve their publication goals. Her skills include all levels of editing and author coaching. She’s there for you from creation to publication. Working from Hollywood, California, she knows what it takes to succeed in today’s marketplace. Her education includes a master’s degree in English literature with a specialization in children’s literature. Christine is also an award-winning author; her traditionally published work for adults and children includes a nonfiction picture book, fiction short stories, and both fiction and nonfiction articles. Find out more at WriteforSuccessEditing.com and ChristineVanZandt.com.